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Wednesday, 19 September 2018
African Cheetah.This is my work on the African Cheetah. I learnt that their spots are all different. I hope you leaning something too!
Hi Albie I love your slides they are so interesting. I never knew that they eat smaller antelopes. I like how you changed the colour of the writing to make it more clear. Rosie
Buenos Dias Albie! I'm Kelsey, a year six student at Ahipara school. I really like how you made a slide on the threats to cheetahs. I also like how you had all of those pictures of cheetahs. Maybe next time you could work on the first slide because on the cheetahs eye, it's hard to read the writing. How did you get the pictures to slide onto the screen?
Kia ora Albie, I am very fond of your blog post on cheetahs. I liked the information you had in your post and the pictures you used. Maybe next time you could work on the colours of your writing. hat made you choose to do a post on Cheetahs?
from Brodie, I like your slides they are so interesting. I never knew that they eat smaller antelopes. I like how you changed the colour of the writing to make it more clear.I liked the information you had in your post and the pictures you used. Brodie.
hello albie I love your slides they are so interesting. I never knew that they eat smaller antelopes. I like how you changed the colour of the writing to make it more clear. you could work on punctuation. and what part of africa do they live in. max max
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ReplyDeleteI love your slides they are so interesting. I never knew that they eat smaller antelopes. I like how you changed the colour of the writing to make it more clear.
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DeleteBuenos Dias Albie! I'm Kelsey, a year six student at Ahipara school. I really like how you made a slide on the threats to cheetahs. I also like how you had all of those pictures of cheetahs. Maybe next time you could work on the first slide because on the cheetahs eye, it's hard to read the writing. How did you get the pictures to slide onto the screen?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Albie, I am very fond of your blog post on cheetahs. I liked the information you had in your post and the pictures you used. Maybe next time you could work on the colours of your writing. hat made you choose to do a post on Cheetahs?
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ReplyDeleteAlbie I like the work you put into these slides,the animals are very under thret,so keep it up.
ReplyDeletefrom Brodie, I like your slides they are so interesting. I never knew that they eat smaller antelopes. I like how you changed the colour of the writing to make it more clear.I liked the information you had in your post and the pictures you used.
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hello albie
ReplyDeleteI love your slides they are so interesting. I never knew that they eat smaller antelopes. I like how you changed the colour of the writing to make it more clear. you could work on punctuation. and what part of africa do they live in. max
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